I like this, but the arrangement could be better and less repetative. Also the sounddesign sounds weak at some parts. Best of luck in the competition!
I like this, but the arrangement could be better and less repetative. Also the sounddesign sounds weak at some parts. Best of luck in the competition!
Thanks for the feedback! :)
uuhhh dang thats a crazy good submission in nates comp! Good luck! And keep up the amazing work.
There are some minor details I'm not to fond off. Like the drum samples aren't really appealing, atleast to me. Also the choir sounds a bit cheap. I like the piece itself tho!
Thank you for your review. :)
I like the chord progression to be quite frank, but the rest of the track is rather meh. i mean it got some oldschoolvibes which is pretty cool now that i think about it. Its repetative. I think what would help would be a clear structure like: intro, melodic break, build up, drop, calm melodic part n stuff. You know? But yeah its okish i guess, keep at it!!!
finish no. 3 or ill bite u
calm down there young man
uhm the drums sound actually quite ok and I mean its pretty standart stuff, but the melody and chords dont really make sense, you know? Especially when you are starting out, try to learn music theory before anything else. A basic grasp of music theory is essentiall. Since this is your first song on here ill leave it at that. If you have any question about production or something, feel free to hit me up!
I know that it isn't that great I just made it to use in a GD level. I'll try to put more effort in the next one, anyways, thank you for your constructive review!
Perfection
LOOOOL I might make a vip ;);););)
absolutely sick!!!
its ok. The mix isnt good but i like the 80s vibes
Thank you for your feedback! :) and yea, I do have got to work on my mixing skills :P
meh idk man. I mean its really cool but its just like listening to a bootleg Virtual Riot. Also, are these Preset from him (some sound like straight outta some of his streams and some just like presets), if not they sound fucking good tbh! I mean you said yourself it was inspired by VR but idk theres a line between inspiration and copycating. Anyways its a pretty neat track overall! Keep it up
lol I'm just seeing this now xD They actually aren't presets, I made everything myself!
The Mix is a mess. The idea is really cool but yeah the mix destroyes this drop completely and makes it unenjoyable in my honest opinion. Other than that its fairly ok some things are way to loud or to dry tho. Overall its okish. It would be great if the mix wasnt such a disaster.
Understood. Thanks, my mixing is a mess, to be honest. I'm working on it, I promise, but it's a long road to good.
Thanks for the honesty!
24 year old physics student with a passion for electronic music, chess and maths. Hope you enjoy my silly noises as much as I do!
- Noah
Age 25
Student
TU Graz
Austria
Joined on 6/1/15